The file is rejected

Rejected file:
let me explain
I left 26,000, which was not enough
The main reason for the rejection was this
I had written self-employed in my resume
Fatal mistake with misfortune, I fixed it and referred it to the master plan
There is a translation error in Job Afar’s letter
I was an expert of clay section, the correct translation of my position
It was hit by head department clay
Unfortunately, when I was the head, there was a department there
Unfortunately, we resolved this
Please give me the English translation of the important letters, tell me that’s what I want, at first they grumble and add a letter, but then they copy exactly the same thing and give it to me.
Take Job Afar’s English version as well
I also rewrote the master plan
These were his questions, actually his paraphrases
1- (Introduction)
Previous academic summary in Iran and jobs with history
2- (Motivation and career goals)
The course of the line of thought of studying in Iran, work, description of duties, what is your current job, feeling the need, searching, finding the program, applying, thank you, JobAfr
This paragraph is a very important paragraph
3-How does my proposed study program in visual arts a natural continuation of my bachelor of arts in
Handicrafts?
Hyperlink of the destination university site
and course transcripts in Iran
Hyperlinking means respecting yourself and the reader’s intelligence
4- (Why Canada)
Relating the multi-nationality of Canada to my field
And the top rank of its universities
5-Why the University of Regina and not a similar program in Iran?

6-What research have you done into studies in your country?
The term mistake of the children in this paragraph is that they think that he is asking about his research work

He is saying that he is not talking about your course in Iran, ok
Give some examples of similar programs and explain why they are not useful
Don’t take the good courses at all
Tell the faulty threads
7-Ties (family, job offer, property)

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